Looking into my style model in depth

As I have finished the first edit edition of my trailer I wanted to see more of the text conventions that are used in 'The Possession'. I am planning on editing mine to become a more polished product as the narrative behind mine isn't as clear as I conducted a bit of audience research with teachers (audience age group of over 40 years old) to see if they could grasp the storyline. A number of the teachers used understood what was being out across but on the other hand a few became confused. Some didn't know if the teenage that is the main character was hurting herself or who/what she had killed or hurt.

First Edit Of Final Trailer

There are a few more adjustments I need to make including the narrative and text used in the trailer.
I am also going to change the order of one or two clips and slow/speed up some of the sections in the trailer.

Copyright Issues Number Two

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am putting together a Film trailer for my A2 media coursework 

We understand that you are the owner of the copyright in the musical composition “In the House In a Heartbeat
by John Murphy” and want to include the song in the trailer.  

Since we are on a limited budget and distribution of the Advert is very low budget, we are hoping that you will allow us this use without any charge.  If this is not possible, please let us know what fee would be required for this use. 

Your signature below, under “confirmed by,” will indicate that you will agree to permit this use without payment of a fee.  Please let us know if you have any questions concerning this license.  Also would you please let us know as soon as possible if this song cannot be licensed so that artistic changes may be made in the songs to be included in the production.  

You can reach us in care of -

Mike Liddell

The Oldershaw Academy a Business & Enterprise College

Valkyrie Road, 

Wallasey, 

Wirral,

CH45 4RJ,

0151 638 2800

Thank you for your help with this matter and we look forward to hearing from you.

Alice Horton

Mike Liddell 

Copyright Issues Number One

Email sent to XL Recordings-

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am putting together a Film trailer for my A2 media coursework 

We understand that you are the owner of the copyright in the musical composition “Missing by The XX” and want to include the song in the trailer.  

Since we are on a limited budget and distribution of the Advert is very low budget, we are hoping that you will allow us this use without any charge.  If this is not possible, please let us know what fee would be required for this use. 

Your signature below, under “confirmed by,” will indicate that you will agree to permit this use without payment of a fee.  Please let us know if you have any questions concerning this license.  Also would you please let us know as soon as possible if this song cannot be licensed so that artistic changes may be made in the songs to be included in the production.  

You can reach us in care of -

Mike Liddell

The Oldershaw Academy a Business & Enterprise College

Valkyrie Road, 

Wallasey, 

Wirral,

CH45 4RJ,

0151 638 2800

Thank you for your help with this matter and we look forward to hearing from you.

Alice Horton

Mike Liddell